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Mar. 27th, 2007 | 12:50 pm

I know I know. I said I would never post again here. But I decided I am going to use Lj for what I intended to use it, posting poems. It's my way of dealing with the world. (writing that is not posting on lj). Hope you like them.

Another day

I sway from left tot right
Stay awake all through the night
I listen to a song
This night lasts so long

In the morning I sleep
Dreaming so very deep
Of things yet to come
Until with dreaming I am done

In the afternoon I wake again
Feeling a new man
A man who can conquer the earth
A man a million dollars worth

I sway from left to right
Stay awake all through the night
I listen to a song
Another day has come and gone

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from: sals_uni_diary
date: Mar. 27th, 2007 01:24 pm (UTC)

First off, it's a great idea to use your journal to past poetry!
Secondly, that's one very nice poem you have there. I sense a certain amount of indeciveness and not quite knowing what you want. Am I right, or am I being stupid again? :P

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from: mrdude1983
date: Mar. 27th, 2007 02:00 pm (UTC)

Well actually I hadn't thought about it like that yet. I wrot it more in the sense of what might seem like a long time will be over before you know it. But I like your interpretation aswell. See int. to lit was right. Authors don't know everything ;-) :D

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